Written by Florencia Scarinci, Tobias Alvarez, Ileana Dziubecki and Julieta Moschetti
Dr Sir or Madam,
My name is Marta Lopez and I am the Science Club's secretary of my college and the reason of this email is to ask information about the timetables and the activities that we can find in the museum.
First of all I would be grateful if you could tell me if there is any restaurant or picnic space where to have lunch with our students. Moreover, I wonder if there is any necessity of booking in advance.
Secondly, our group is quite large so I want to know if there is any limit of people, and if there is any discount for big groups.
I look forward to hearing from you,
yours faithfully,
Marta Lopez.
1)Careful with the introductory words!
ReplyDelete2)Try to paraphrase what is in bold type, there are some grammar mistakes!
3) It's good to ask questions directly but remember to créate a context for them, say sth in connection to what you are going to ask later on.
4)Good ending!